I'm always thinking of you. Though I wrote this for a friend who's not well enough to utilize the social media, I know that a lot of you (and your loved ones) are battling conditions over which you have little or no control. That said, I hope this poem provides spiritual warmth and comfort. It's my intent, though words are so limiting. And that's kinda the point of my poem.
Also, this is the first (non-erotic) poem I've written in years. Naughty rhyme is much easier for me.
Anyway, take gentle care of yourselves.
dried roses, my coffee table centerpiece
With wholehearted sincerity:
If words were verbs, this verse would serve
To spin plight into light like you deserve.
To trade the pains and strife you bear
With regained faith in life that’s fair
Erase all portions of your toll
Embrace and restore your gracious soul.
If words could expel your gravest fears
They’d
repel what plagues you
And those
you hold dear.
Inject
youthful zest and the same flashing spark
That
helped move you through
Past
patches of dark.
They’d
kill the ills and cease the disease.
Fill you
with seamless steam, thrill, and ease.
If words
could convey your out-of-sight worth
They’d
bathe you in every last diamond on earth.
Words:
they can blast, pop, and pound
And yet
not make a sound.
They can
crowd real loud
When
there’s no one around.
Yet in
times of travail
When
hours require fight
Words,
flail, fail, and
duck out of sight.
They
can’t serve as elixirs
Or tenderize
the gruff
But
they’ll render an
“I love
you.”
I wish
that was enough.
Robyn Alana
Engel 8.17
Heart balm and solace spill generously from your words. Thank you. And best wishes for your friend.
ReplyDeleteEC, I often study your words - you find and create magic with them ("heart balm," "solace spill...").
DeleteYou're welcome and Thank YOU.
I kept waiting for dongs and sex but you did it, you made it through an entire poem without erotic imagery. It's really good. I enjoyed this poem and I think you would make an excellent rapper. I liked that you messed with font size to make a point too. Here's hoping your friend took the message to heart.
ReplyDeleteNailed it, did I? Smiles. Thank you kindly, PVP. I haven't sent it to my friend yet - I'm going to do something special (an attempt at art and framing) first. It was supposed to be a bday gift, but the bday past. So glad it's been received well here.
DeleteDo you have to do back flips and spit and curse and stuff to be a rapper? I'm good with the cursing, but not the other two.
oops, it's "passed," right? I get that one mixed up sometimes.
DeleteThis brought tears to my eyes--wonderful words, but love is even more important and your love and care shine through your words.
ReplyDeleteWhen I inspire laughter or (better yet) tears, it's the ultimate compliment. Wholehearted gratitude, Sage.
DeleteSure will help lift up one and all, as you did it at your hall. Words can help, but sometimes we sure have to push through when the crap hits the fan.
ReplyDeleteWe sure do need to keep pushing through - and in those times, we have no energy for the pushing. Somehow we make it through.
DeleteIt's a brilliant poem. The sort that I'd love to receive.
ReplyDeletePlease, Treey, consider it received.
DeleteGratitude.
You're a sweetheart, Robyn.
ReplyDeleteAs are you, Wilma.
DeleteThank you.
Indeed - sometimes a hug says more than any words can. Are you a hugger, Robyn?
ReplyDeleteI am indeed a hugger, GB. I hope you are too. It'd be nice to exchange a hug with a thoughtful ape like yourself someday.
DeleteThis is beautiful, Robyn. Wonderfully done. Wishing you all good things.
ReplyDeleteI'm flattered, Connie. Thank you, and all of life's best to you as well.
DeleteBeautifully written Robyn. I am fortunate to be healthy at the moment. Your love goes a long way in the world to help those in less fortunate positions. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI hope so, Jono.
DeleteThank you and you're welcome, my friend.
This is beautiful 💖Thanks for sharing it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, and you're most welcome, Martha.
DeleteComing from someone with a chronic illness and who lives with kidney disease and God knows what else, sometimes being there and an I love you is enough.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad, because sometimes (often, actually - much more often than we'd like) it's all we have to give. Since I can't be there with you, I hope this poem is enough.
DeleteLove you.
so heartfelt and powerful. Words can do the job, actions too. And by writing this and sharing it on your blog, you show the kind thoughtful person you are. All the best to your friend. Share the comments, and big hugs
ReplyDeleteYou always choose your words so thoughtfully, Joanne. I appreciate you.
DeleteLovely poem. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you like it, Stephen.
DeleteThank you, and you're most welcome.
After the weekend's events, that's a comfort to all of us, except the orange one.
ReplyDeleteLove,
Janie
Nothing is a comfort to the orange one.
DeleteI'm glad this was timely for the rest, though.
Love to you.
That was beautiful, Robyn. I'm sorry your friend is suffering right now and hope and pray things improve for them soon. Much love and hugs, my friend!
ReplyDeleteEnjoy the rest of your week!
Elsie
Thank you, dear heart.
DeleteA great rest of the week to you too.
Much love.
I liked your poem. Words can mean so much.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
Love to you, Andrew.
DeleteThank you.
What a true beautiful gift!!! This was so nice Robyn.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Holli. I appreciate it.
DeleteThis is a very beautiful poem. My sister in law has breast cancer and she is being brave. I may like to translate this poem and read it to her. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry to learn this, Munir. I'm touched that you may translate this for her. That means a lot. I'd love to see a translation.
DeleteI'll keep her in my thoughts.
Blessings.
I wish it was enough too.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Robyn.
Beautiful sentiments in the notion of creating the poem too.
xo
Thank you, Anthony.
DeleteLove you.
"I love you."
ReplyDeleteYeah, that's a pretty good start!
Yes it is.
DeleteAnd I love you too, Al.
I'm late to the party, but on a day like this especially, I needed this. Not all is dark. There's still goodness in the world. We support each other, and we use our words to do so.
ReplyDeleteNow then, back to using my words to describe the darkness in the world. (Ha!)
Much love.
Aw, thank you, dear friend.
DeleteThere's so much goodness in the world - yet stupidity eclipses it.
You know I love ya.